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On the surface, this story has an incredibly naive view of the world, but it may be one of the most realistic depictions of human existence written by a novice author. Well done. I look forward to reading future drafts. Grade: A
It's gorgeous to look at: the color, the brushstrokes, but the subject matter is boring. With the right subject matter and composition, this painting style will succeed. Grade: B
This poem doesn't have much going for it beyond its title. Don't rely on the thesaurus to find your words. Write from the heart, get the feeling on the paper, then fine tune. Please post your revisions so we can see how you improve. Grade: F
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